Auction Item #27

What's up for grabs: A query critique plus your first chapter. (Adult)

Who donated the awesome: Sarah Blair

Why that makes it something you must have: Sarah is my other half. She completes me. She'll probably complete you, too. She has a wicked eye for detail and continuity in your story. She also has the Midas touch on queries. Thank goodness she's my CP and you don't have to outbid me on this one.