Auction Item #34

What's up for grabs: A query critique plus first chapter (YA, NA)

Who donated the awesome:Vicki Orians

Why that makes it something you must have: Vicki is a member of The Writer Diaries. She great at what she does and...wait for it...she does a brilliant Yoda impression. You probably won't hear that in your query, but you can imagine her saying the crits like Yoda and why wouldn't you bid on that???